This week we are doing writing about swimming as we have had lots of swimming lessons recently. We are working on having interesting beginnings and structure in our writing. I especially like the last sentence!
In the warm pool my friends and I did freestyle under the water, it was so fun. Diving into the water I was kicking my legs really fast. I love swimming because I love diving into the water. I also love my teacher Mr Moran he is the best teacher ever and Miss King and Miss Davis too.
In the warm pool my friends and I did freestyle under the water, it was so fun. Diving into the water I was kicking my legs really fast. I love swimming because I love diving into the water. I also love my teacher Mr Moran he is the best teacher ever and Miss King and Miss Davis too.
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